Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Undedicated Decisions

(Authors note: This essay is about how the Loss of innocence can be shown in two different books and the how loss of innocence can be the same in different books.)

In every book, there are a few main themes, including a common theme called the loss of innocence. I’m going to compare how loss of innocence can be projected in two completely different books.

For instance in The Fighting Grounds by Avi there are some great examples regarding loss of innocence. Jonathan, the main character lost his innocence a few times in the book. He felt violated and scared when he was captured by the Hessians. Jonathan didn’t know if he was going to be killed or if he would be lucky enough to slip through enemy lines and gain back his freedom. Another example is when Jonathan joined the army. People were really wondering if he was capable of fighting. Deep down Jonathan knew that he made the worst decision of his life.

In comparison, The Outsiders by S.E Hinson Ponyboy was the main character who also lost his innocence. Ponyboy could not make good decisions. His life was crumbling in front of him. His friends were dying. He could do nothing to help his friends avoid death. Also, when Johnny killed Bob, Ponyboy felt as if he had to live life on the run because the cops would prosecute him.

In addition, both books were similar in describing the characters loss of innocents through a fight. Both Ponyboy and Jonathan were dragged into a bloody gruesome fight. The characters were injured and felt threatened. The characters had to grow up quickly to survive.

In addition, both books were similar in describing the characters’ loss of innocence through a fight. Both Ponyboy and Jonathan were dragged into a bloody gruesome fight. The characters were injured and felt threatened. The characters had to go up quickly to survive.

In conclusion almost every book that has the same theme, have something in common even if they are about two completely different things. The themes can be tricky to spot but if you spot it you may understand the book better.

2 comments:

  1. Your comparing and contrasting definitely met the standards and you have a well written piece here! Don't forget to underline the book titles. I think this piece should be scored a 97/100!

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  2. I think this is a great essay but there are some things that you can fix like, spelling you spelled essay in the authors note wrong. and you could have a little longer body paragraphs but over all it makes sense

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