Song review

(Authors note: this is a short response to two songs, it’s a rough copy and I wrote this as a journal in the first few minutes of class)

All songs have meaning. Some songs are insightful and mysteries, others dark and gloomy. Emotions make up the music industry, just like art if there is no emotion there is no point to it.

For example “Big Yellow Taxi” and “Field Below” are both well known songs. Along with most songs the lyrics alone sound like a poem, although the poem definitely doesn’t sound like the song. “Big Yellow Taxi’s lyric’s definitely weren’t happy and same with the song. But when you move to Field Below, the lyric’s are depressing but the song isn’t, the song is strong, upbeat and energetic.

As you can see, the lyrics of the song don’t always describe how you feel, that’s why some people see meanings of songs differently. It’s a miracle how songs can have hundreds of thousands of meanings twisted and burrowed inside of them.

5 min poem

(authors note: this is a junky poem i wrote in 5 min for a class assignment, the assignment was to write it in 5 min, also the theme was cruel death,if you cant realize,
the punctuation is wrong and all the spellings are wrong but some poetry has no rules)=)

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short descripion to a long poem

(Authors note: This is a short response to the old school poem Mother to Son by Langston Hughes)


One example of the metaphor the poem “Mother to Son” is, a splintery junky staircase. The stair case symbolizes life, once you start you mustn’t stop, the splinters and missing boards show flaws and breaks in life but eventually you’ll hit the top. Another example of figurative language is, life for me isn’t been no crystal stair, this means her life hasn’t been perfect in any way but she still has lived a life

On another note, there is an itching tone to this poem. You must read this poem in a Sothern accent because if you don’t you’ll have no idea what is going on. This is a sad story simply because; you know that peoples life’s weren’t good back in the day, although it does show that they can live a better life than their assisters

describing the undescribable is possable, are you confused

(Authors note: this is a short character description of Cole in the book touching spirit bear; it describes him in both books touching sprite bear and Ghost of sprite bear.)

Cole Mathews is a 16 year old misfit that won’t take no for an answer brutally mauls one of his class mates until their bones cracked. He is forced to go to juvenile detention. He didn’t know it, but his life would change in a flash.

He once was a punk dressed lowlife, but shortly after he was opted into a program called circle justice. After months of games Cole seen his chance, he was given his last chance. He was banished, into a barren wasteland. It smelled like fresh salty sea but had a hint of rotten flesh. Most may say that rehab doesn’t work but trust me, this type will.