Wednesday, April 04, 2012

Outcomes (rough)

(authors note: this is a essay about scenes determining the ending of a book's,specifically the book touching Sprite Bear.)

All books have dramatic scenes, some good some bad. Those scenes can easily determine the ending of the book. Ranging from a fight to a simple conversation, one wrong scene can make or break a book.

“Touching Sprite Bear”, a book about hardcore survival clearly has dramatic scene that determine the end of the book, and here is an example. If Cole (the main character) wouldn’t have beat up Peter (the person that the conflict revolves around) Cole would have never went to the island. If this scene wouldn’t have happen the outcome of the book could be completely different.

Some possible outcomes are if Cole wouldn’t have beat Peter, Cole wouldn’t have learned his lesson therefore he would still be a mindless jerk. Also because he wouldn’t have changed his entire school would be disorganized disaster, just like a mall on black Friday. Cole wouldn’t have gone to the island (the place where he gained control of his anger) his life would have more hardships than ever before. He would face attempted murder charges and possibly to go prison for the rest of his life.

So as you can see, one simple line can determine the ending of a book. All books have variables, some good some bad. All possible outcomes are decided before you know it. Because of that, a simple handshake or decision has the power to crumble a story, and real life has no acceptations.

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